Dragons and Silk

High fantasy with some naked folk.
Escape
Escape
9th Oct 2017, 4:25 AM in By the Horns
Average Rating: 5 (9 votes)
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Hm... I hate this page, but I couldn't make it any better for some reason.
User comments:
Hedrah
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Why ya hate it? the flow isn't broken and the setup is sweet.
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If she'd been holding that dagger in her left hand, it probably would have worked acceptably. :|
Phuji
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Phuji
If that's really how you feel, then retcon it.I think it's fine, I get the jist of the actions happening here and the flow of how we got here, so I think it's fine.
marmelmm
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marmelmm
Boobflash makes ANY page better! <3
Sheela
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Sheela
Boobflash makes MANY things better, not just pages!

*sage nod*
marmelmm
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marmelmm
This is the sweet and pure truth!
Miao
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Miao
I like how she's not claiming to have saved her friends but telling the guards that she saved THEM from her friends!

Compositionally, I prefer the dagger in the right, because it balances the action on the lower left.
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I think that's fair.
Sheela
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Sheela
I think Miao is right, it works just fine for me too. :)
cattservant
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cattservant
Not going to stay and negotiate, it seems...
Mister Flames
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Tried that, and Tia's bored now.
Sheela
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Sheela
Yeah, better get things going before she gets even more bored. :D

You never know what sort of trouble, that someone that is insanely strong, can make ... just out of boredom.
JoneK
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JoneK
I can't read what the second box says, what the guards say on that...
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The one with a knife at his neck is telling the yelping one not to be hasty. Sorry if it's not clear.
Sheela
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Sheela
"Heyheydon'tbehastyOK?!" = "Hey hey don't be hasty OK?!"

Reading this on a phone are we ?
'cause it was perfectly clear on a regular monitor.
JoneK
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JoneK
aaah of course "do not be hasty" not "behasty" =D It's my bad engle