Dragons and Silk

High fantasy with some naked folk.
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5th Aug 2017, 9:27 PM in Bull Princess
Average Rating: 5 (9 votes)
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I like the first two panels, but the rest I'm pretty unhappy with. I think I'm really bad at machinery.
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Nama
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Nama
that's a big butt
Mister Flames
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I believe the proper term is "dat ass."
defo18
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defo18
Someone call R Kelly

....that may be a bad joke
Sheela
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Sheela
Butt-slapped ! :D

Also, machinery and non-organic stuff like houses and such, are utterly unforgiving if you get the perspective even the tiniest bit wrong.
jamie59
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jamie59
Need a sign "Caution Big Butt".
Malcadon
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Malcadon
Damn! Baby got back!

And yes, Sir. Mix-A-Lot would approve! B) _\\\
Ethereal (Guest)
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"...even white boys got to shout."
cattservant
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cattservant
Whap-Whap-Whap!
Kintoga
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Kintoga
Well, you got a chuckle out of me with this one
JoneK
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JoneK
Am I the only one who feels sorry for the poor sleepy girl :D
Dude Abides (Guest)
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And then the bandits returned to take their vengeance on the three sleeping girls.
ColdFusion (Guest)
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You're good at foliage! The only thing I could even remotely complain about is the lines coming out from the door, above and below 'whap'. I don't quite get what they represent, or why they're... striped. But everything else here is great. I love this trailer.
Reutan
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It's the force of the door opening.
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Yeah, it looked flat without them.
BlitzMcGee (Guest)
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Beautiful scene, and I love how completely her face in panel 2 says "I'm exhausted."

One minor quibble though. With her hand position, the shadow of her hand would not have fallen on her face. For her hand to cast shadow on her face, her hand would have to be between her face and the source of the light (assuming the moon here).

But, of course, that brings up other problems. She's judging the time, I get that, and panel 2 would lose beauty without the shadow. *Meh* Artistic license wins out over science :D
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Yup! Or she moved her hand two degrees to keep the brightness out of her eyes.
marmelmm
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marmelmm
I'm MMM, and I approve of this automatic door opener. <3
Sohom_comi
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She is undoubtedly THICC