Comic 145 - Harpooner
22nd Jul 2018, 10:48 PM in Shallows
Harpooner
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Hm. Trying some stuff with colors, and I don't think this particular approach will work.
User comments:
Lee M edit delete reply
Lee M
That could be a spinoff series in its own right. Lilly Rose: Squid Hunter!
Smithe (Guest) edit delete reply
I said it before, Lilly keeps getting cuter with every page.

Is she gonna turn out to be the true villain of this chapter? She’ll turn out to be some kind of demon cuddle-bug in disguise to go with the ant queen?
Smithe (Guest) edit delete reply
Also,

LILLY! DONT RUN WITH SHARP OBJECTS! You’ll put an eye out!
Mister Flames edit delete reply
While a cute idea, I don't think Lilly is demon material. That's a River Folk thing, right?
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view
Heheh
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
uh-oh .. View is laughing !
Quick, everyone hide your favorite sewer elf from his evil machinations!

That said, a demonic cuddle-bug sounds kinda cute, but in a naughty way! >_<
Shaylyn-KM edit delete reply
Shaylyn-KM
Ahh, this is looking so good!! I've got some catching up to do!! :'DD
Blue-tongued lizard (Guest) edit delete reply
Do Lilly’s eyes change color? They were bluer when we first met her. She’s also lost the dark circles around her eyes, but maybe that’s because she’s caught up on her sleep?
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view
Ah, I may have to tweak the page.
datora (Guest) edit delete reply
Don't know if you've already tweaked the page yet (I'm guessing yes), but just put it down to lighting. Page 141, for example, her eyes are nearly silver. Which looks great with her silver-pewter hair. People's eyes do look quite different from different angles under different lighting, especially some of the lighter colored ones. Suggestion, with Lilly or any other character: shifting colors can be a cool trait either by individual or race. Own it. Play with it. It's a valid property.
Cuddlelion (Guest) edit delete reply
I really like that first panel, the circle colors of magic are especially interesting, the shadows are dramatic too.
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view
Some of it I like, but the actual technique needs a lot more work.
Terashell (Guest) edit delete reply
An Ozoan who doesn't speak Ozoan? Suspicious.
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
I have met black people who speak neither Zulu nor Xhosa … suspicious !

That said, this would be a great time for View to do some race/species exposition. :)
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view
Hm, I wonder if that's why this chapter exists!
Terashell (Guest) edit delete reply
That's understandable but she also seemingly lives in a community with a ton of Ozoans who do speak, so... I mean it's entirely possible she grew up somewhere else, adopted by non-Ozoans but... *shrugs*
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
I've also met people in America who doesn't speak English ?

And this chapter clearly exists to bamboozle us. >_<
But I for one, am looking forward to learning more about the peoples. :)
Maurits (Guest) edit delete reply
What are Lily Rose's stats?
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Slender, firm, feels good, and then she is made from Sugar, Spice and all things nice!
view edit delete reply
view
They'll be shown in good time!
JoneK edit delete reply
JoneK
Donuts.. And view you are doing the good work :)

Take a swim one day, so you won't over heat..